Entry #3- Mint
This morning I decided I wanted a snack before I go to work. It is also something that can help wake me up and make my morning breath smell good. I grabbed the noisy wrinkly wrapper out from my backpack. As I start to unwrap it, you can hear the little crinkly noises it makes as if you are squishing a bag of chips. As soon as I ate it, it tasted like as if I had just finished brushing my teeth again.
It may be a small, circular, little snack, but it sure does brighten up your mood for the next 20 seconds you are enjoying it. You can taste the freshness and feel the crunch on every bite. Sometimes, if you are lucky enough, the taste can last for over 5 minutes. Don't worry, you can always have more after. After all, you can never get tired of having a fresh breath.
Personally, I like to carry the small wrappers. However, having a big, bulky bottle of goodness is always delightful; especially when they come in different flavors. Me, the green ones are my favorite because you can see and feel the little dots on the snack when you are enjoying them. It just means more flavor for me. Well, at least I know I always have a good snack on me that I can have at any time and will give me fresh breath.
You are bouncing back & forth between 1st and 2nd person here. I think it would be more effective to stay in the 1st person and write this from your perspective to fully engage the reader with this experience.
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